paperchase v.two - read please

*UPDATED*
v.one [link]
re-make of the other piece i did i didnt like it that much but i love this piece ! hope you do also !
also added more colour and text so you can see it.

PLEASE READ :

i have some good news !
today i found out that my fiancee is pregnent ~OwNzBabeh so im going to be a dad ! wOOt
im on top of the world.

OwNz //